Shut up and kiss me!

[CYBERDISC]

CRAAAAAAAPPPP FINALLY im done..... sh*tloads of work.... but FINALLY.

Please read it in common manga way (from right to left)

Enjoy and comment! constructive criticism accepted!

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http://i593.photobucket.com/albums/tt11/CYBERDISC/6.jpg

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http://i593.photobucket.com/albums/tt11/CYBERDISC/7.jpg

[Supernova141]

Haha, the artwork is great, ESPECIALLY the kiss, it's just amazing.

Though, that doesn't exactly seem like something Minami would say ^^;

[Konata Suzumiya]

that artwork is spectacular O_O
Amazing job well done!

[CYBERDISC]

Haha, the artwork is great, ESPECIALLY the kiss, it's just amazing.

Though, that doesn't exactly seem like something Minami would say ^^;


Thank you desu![hr]

that artwork is spectacular O_O
Amazing job well done!


Thank you desu ! :D

[Droote]

Really nice! You are very good at drawing.

[CYBERDISC]

Really nice! You are very good at drawing.


Thank you desu~ ^^

[Malek]

Wow thats realy freaking nice. Realy,i implore you to make more.
Very nice artwork. Good job.

[Lucky Flame]

The artwork is amazing, the shading, especially in Kagami's face in the last panel, and the sparkling orbs of light in the kiss scene just blows me away.

[CYBERDISC]

Jajajaj thx you two :P if i watch lucky star and get another ideea i will.

[leniman]

why would Kagami wanna shoot herself anyway? I thought you said you like her




cuz Kagami=POWER OVERWHELMING

[CYBERDISC]

why would Kagami wanna shoot herself anyway? I thought you said you like her




cuz Kagami=POWER OVERWHELMING





Okay lol i just wanted to make it funnier xD she just watched something really disturbing for her i'd say lol, of coarse i luv her >:(

[Lucky Flame]

I laughed when I saw that, Kagami's expressions are always awesome.

[KonataTheAwesome]

wow,dont usually like pics like this,but.the drawing is great and this is great.

[Droote]

It would look better though, or rather more professional if you had capitalised i's in the dialogues.

[CYBERDISC]

wow,dont usually like pics like this,but.the drawing is great and this is great.


Lol thx :P[hr]

It would look better though, or rather more professional if you had capitalised i's in the dialogues.


wow..... how couldn't I noticed that >.< *blows his head with a rifle*

[Droote]

But in doujins, it doesn't really count that much. It was just me trying to give you constructive critic of some kind.

[kirant]

Tsukasa's reaction seems to be slightly OoC. Very minor case for Konata too IMO.

Everything else looks great though.

[Droote]

Hiyori would be the one having a nosebleed, yes.

[CYBERDISC]

Tsukasa's reaction seems to be slightly OoC. Very minor case for Konata too IMO.

Everything else looks great though.


hmmm.... i thought they matched. Thx btw ^^

[jbm0592]

That kiss looks REALLY great. You should color it in photoshop or something because it really does look nice. The only thing that's wrong with it is the text looks out of place because it's typed, while everything else is drawn with a pencil. But other than that, excellent work.

[CYBERDISC]

That kiss looks REALLY great. You should color it in photoshop or something because it really does look nice. The only thing that's wrong with it is the text looks out of place because it's typed, while everything else is drawn with a pencil. But other than that, excellent work.


Thx xP but i don't know how to color in photoshop, that's what i will learn in college soon.

[Malek]

I hope you make more,you are realy good at this. Love the way you did the kiss.

[CYBERDISC]

I hope you make more,you are realy good at this. Love the way you did the kiss.


Lol thx again... but it will be a while till i make fanart again, making fanart degrades your artist skill unless you have mastered drawing skills already, and that delays my skill improvement progress. I need to draw stuff by myself with no reference at all, and 100% original.

[Lucky Flame]

I hope you make more,you are realy good at this. Love the way you did the kiss.


Lol thx again... but it will be a while till i make fanart again, making fanart degrades your artist skill unless you have mastered drawing skills already, and that delays my skill improvement progress. I need to draw stuff by myself with no reference at all, and 100% original.


Same, when I can do that, I will have reached one of my goals. I will be amazed by myself.

[kirant]

Tsukasa's reaction seems to be slightly OoC. Very minor case for Konata too IMO.

Everything else looks great though.


hmmm.... i thought they matched. Thx btw ^^


For Tsukasa, it's more the massive amount of circling it looks like you did. It now seems like she's wearing some really dark make-up...

[BBQpigeon]

Great work! You're definitely improving with your skills. I really love Kagami's expression at the end!

[kagaminsama]

i just join now yet get to see good arts.... ^^ really good works pals..... ^^

i cant wait see your next work ^^