My 1st Lucky Star fanic

[Tsukasa's_Lover]

Please come and read it and tell me what you think so far. Please note I've only completed the 1st chapter.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5590567/1/Balsamic_Vampire

[furball]

laconic veresion plz. I'll read it later.

[Tsukasa's_Lover]

just save the link or come back to this thread at another time.

[CYBERDISC]

Yo what happened with all the yuri and naughty scenes man? I wanted sum action :(

[furball]

Yo what happened with all the yuri and naughty scenes man? I wanted sum action :(

Yuri with T_L? not gonna happen anytime soon.

[KonataTheAwesome]

:) great!

[Tsukasa's_Lover]

Yo what happened with all the yuri and naughty scenes man? I wanted sum action :(

Yuri with T_L? not gonna happen anytime soon.

there will be some.... flirtatious scenes in this story. So have patients, this was only the 1st chapter. Though none of it will be yuri.

[Michiyo]

No offence, but I'm not going to read it if it has het romance in it, sorry ~nyaa-nyaa.

[KonataTheAwesome]

No offence, but I'm not going to read it if it has het romance in it, sorry ~nyaa-nyaa.


just because you say no offense,dosent mean the story writer wont take offense :/

come on.....live a little.

[Michiyo]

just because you say no offense,dosent mean the story writer wont take offense :/

come on.....live a little.

If I didn't say "no offence" at the start, then that would give the impression that I was trying to be mean, and I don't want people to think that, since I don't try to be mean ~nyaa-nyaa.

And anyways, the reason why I said that was because if there were to be het romance in his fanfic, then that would mean there would be OCs in his fanfic, and I personally despise OCs ~nyaa-nyaa.

[furball]

I think theres some sort of rivalry/enmity between KTA and EM. Catfight soon? *pulls out popcorn while waiting for the next chapter*
EDIT: HOLY CRAP! the great writer zokusho read it? This automatically gets a +3 stars T_L

[Tsukasa's_Lover]

Yes EM there will be OC in this fanfic. if you don't like them that's fine, but you can at least still read it just for the fun of it.

[Droote]

Yo what happened with all the yuri and naughty scenes man? I wanted sum action :(

You see, T_L is a homophobe and therefore does not like yuri.

[nathangonmad]

You see, T_L is a homophobe and therefore does not like yuri.

Epic

[Tsukasa's_Lover]

FINALLY updated;http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5590567/2/Balsamic_Vampire

enjoy chapter 2 everyone.

[Evileel]

Wow, its long. I'll need some time to read it all.
Meantime maybe you can give us some spoilers? Will Tsukasa die in the end?

[Malek]

The aisle Miyuki goes to cheek still has some girls in it

Typo, about the 16th Paragraph down. Have not yet finished reading, will do so later.

[Tsukasa's_Lover]

The aisle Miyuki goes to cheek still has some girls in it

Typo, about the 16th Paragraph down. Have not yet finished reading, will do so later.

I've never been the best speller in the world so there's bound to be a few misspelled words here and there. But that comes with the territory.

[uberpwnage13]

Wow, really good writing. I've been to three filmmaking camps (the most recent of which was purely focused on writing the first act of a feature screenplay), so you can take my word for it. As you can see, I'm obviously inserting a subtle brag into my praise. Ignore it. :)

Also, spelling errors don't detract from the story, because everyone makes typoes.

[Malek]

I've never been the best speller in the world so there's bound to be a few misspelled words here and there. But that comes with the territory.


I expected as much, I only wish to point them out.

[Vic]

Okay, I heard in the 7th manga that Tsukasa is like yuri tight with Ayano after they go to college because Ayano dumped her boyfriend and all boys after that.

[Tsukasa's_Lover]

Okay, I heard in the 7th manga that Tsukasa is like yuri tight with Ayano after they go to college because Ayano dumped her boyfriend and all boys after that.

wrong place to put this and no Tsukasa doesn't go Yuri for Ayano.